Wednesday, January 20, 2010

EssayyyY~

Question 1 (:
Nowadays, teachers tend to call their parents telling them what their children have done bad in school. I think that its true that parents should be blamed for their child's errant behaviour as they are not teaching them properly.

Question 2:
Teenagers nowadays are self-centered and ignorant as they are spoilt by their parents and think very highly of themselves. I think that i would agree with this but not very far as not all teenagers are self-centered.

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  2. Question 1: Maybe you could explore how are parents not teaching their children properly?

    Will there be a case which parents are not to be blamed?

    Question 2:
    You should be clearer when you are stating your opinion. Your opinion should be, " I agree to some extent that teenagers are self-centred and ignorant"

    Write more... what makes you think that some teenagers are not self-centred and ignorant?

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  3. For question 2

    How would you start your introduction for second question?

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